I am very pleased to recommend Miss xx, an excellent graduate from xx Institute of Technology, to the master program of Economics at your university. Such an outstanding person as her in terms of character and abilities is indeed worthy of this opportunity to develop her potential and contribute to your school. I am sure that she will be a promising student who will greatly benefit from the future study at your esteemed university.
During my many years as a Professor I have come into contact with countless students. While some students stand out in the time that I teach them, only few make a lasting impression. Being one of my most gifted students, x is someone who has made such as impression. In spite of the fact that it has been only four years since I have had her as student, her delightful personality and ability of organization and leadership gave me deep impression. x showed her quick ability of accepting (acceptance改为accepting) new knowledge. In class, she was always the most active one who often discussed with other students about academic issues in order to make progress for each other.Besides, thanks to her earnest and strict attitude to study, x was always top10 in class and (won the scholarship every year本句是按你的要求插进去的). In addition, she demonstrated her strong organizational skill in various campus activities. For example, she organized students to visit Ministry of Foreign Affairs.(She won the third prize in the Virtual Stocking Contest held by the school 本句是按你的要求插进去的) Due to her excellent performance, Miss x was highly praised by the teachers as well as students.
x is really an extraordinary student with great intelligence and strong ability of organization. (She worked at Student Union for years and was deeply loved by the teachers and the students.本句是按你的要求插进去的)
Meanwhile,Miss X is in good health.She loves sports, playing volleyball very well.
For the reasons mentioned above,I dearly hope that you will consider her application favorable. In case you need any future information about her, please feel free to contact me.
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I am very pleased to recommend Miss xx, an excellent graduate from xx Institute of Technology, to the master program of Economics at your university. Such an outstanding person as her in terms of character and abilities is indeed worthy of this opportunity to develop her potential and contribute to your school. I am sure that she will be a promising student who will greatly benefit from the future study at your esteemed university.
During my many years as a Professor I have come into contact with countless students. While some students stand out in the time that I teach them, only few make a lasting impression. Being one of my most gifted students, x is someone who has made such as impression. In spite of the fact that it has been only four years since I have had her as student, her delightful personality and ability of organization and leadership gave me deep impression. x showed her quick ability of accepting new knowledge. In class, she was always the most active one who often discussed with other students about academic issues in order to make progress for each other.Besides, thanks to her earnest and strict attitude to study, x was always top10 in class and won the scholarship every year. In addition, she demonstrated her strong organizational skill in various campus activities. For example, she organized students to visit Ministry of Foreign Affairs.She won the third prize in the Virtual Stocking Contest held by the school.Due to her excellent performance, Miss X was highly praised by the teachers as well as students.
X is really an extraordinary student with great intelligence and strong ability of organization. She worked at Student Union for years and was deeply loved by the teachers and the students.
Meanwhile,Miss X is in good health.She loves sports, playing volleyball very well.
For the reasons mentioned above,I dearly hope that you will consider her application favorable. In case you need any future information about her, please feel free to contact me.