楼上的筒子写得很丰富,但细节有些语法错误,小小更正一下：
I was very busy in the summer holiday.At first I had a school reunion with the former classmates.As we hadn't seen each other for a long time,this reunion was a good chance for us to enjoy the time.And then I planned to take a part-time job.I thought it was the most effective way to earn more money because I wanted to go on a trip.Afterwards,I went to Guangxi Province to travel there.It is one of the most beautiful places I have ever been to.There are many places of interest like Guilin,Yangshuo.The scennery there is very elegant.We enjoyed the the fresh air and blue sky and had a good rest.I believe it is the most wonderful moment in my summer holiday.