第二行：and it was so a lovely day ,改so为such
So we were sure to have a lot of funs,改为 so we were sure that we would have a lot of fun
第三行：kite went up into the sky,改为 kite started to fly high in the sky
go highter,改为 fly higher
第四行：Then suddenly I felt anything wrong,改Suddenly, I felt something wrong.Then ,I looked up into the sky and the kite had been broken.
第五行：you know who makes a kite fly high.,改为 you know what makes a kite flies high
第六行：skill,改为 skills
learned good ,改为 learned a good