Dear friends,
Thank you so much for inviting me to stay with you when I was in UK.I will always remember your kindness.It was great for me to use English in the "real world".I was also gald that I could experience a different climate ,though I did not prepare to the cold of the English winter!If I had to do it again ,I would certainly try to find out as much information as I could about the weather of a country before go to study there next time!
Thanks again for everything .Surely I had the great time there.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Lei
1.stay 后加with
2.while 改为 when
3.am改为 was
4.去掉 UK 前的 the
5.kineness前的 you 改为 your
6.greatly 改为 great
7.on 改为 in
8.although 改为 though
9.was 改为 did
10.many 改为 much
PS：有几处没大写,我改了过来.