老大,to do 是不能连着写的.连着写就变成另外一个词：嘈杂.看半天才看懂,我说这是啥语法呢.
你讨厌做的事,要顺着老师的意,千万不要说你最恨的是完成这篇stupid英语作文.你要说,我最恨上网了,我最恨玩电脑游戏了,我最恨不好好学习了.
于是这样几句话应运而生.
play computer game is definitely the thing I hate to do.first of all,the game addict to me and always makes me out of control.it spend me too much time to finish my homework.Second,the computer moniter is harmful to my eyes.
这是主题句,其他的就自己动手吧.