第一个逗号后面的I改为大写.以后每一句开头都要大写.then i used mu body 改为then i used my body.
i painted the things that i want to do on the paper 可以改为
i painted the all things that i wanted on the paper .
改的不好别笑话,我英语也不太好.别喷
第一个逗号后面的I改为大写.以后每一句开头都要大写.then i used mu body 改为then i used my body.
i painted the things that i want to do on the paper 可以改为
i painted the all things that i wanted on the paper .
改的不好别笑话,我英语也不太好.别喷