Working individually is benefits for us 这句话不对,应该改成这样：Working individually is beneficial for us to have a habit of thinking independengtly.
They will get correct conclude which after discussion这句话也不对,应该改成这样：They will get correct conclusions after discussion.后面的也不对,应该是：So they can learn from each other
后面的compare with this two ways也不对,应该是comparing these two ways,I prefer to work in a team.后面important拼写错误了,teamwork也拼写错误.最后一句改成：in order to achieve some goals