原问：My Best Friend
Jenny is one of my friends and then she is my best friend.
She is really beautiful.She has long hair,big black eyes and a big red mouth.She is tall but thin.
Jenny likes singing and drawing very much.She often listens some CDs on a rideo and draws some pictures.I think the pictures are all very nice.She also likes writing things.So,she often make some writing exercise.
We are good friends.But we are not in the same school now.In winter vacation,she usually comes to my home and we do our homework together.Sometimes,we play computer games.I'm happy that we can get together again.
建议：稍稍注意一下少用重复的,包括意义和用词.这样会更好.