Question

英语作文纠错I visited the exhibition on the Nanjing Massacre in la

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I visited the exhibition on the Nanjing Massacre （去除in,因为表示早中晚或者星期的词放在句末表时间,且这些词前面加this/THAT/LAST等词时,时间前不需要加介词in/on等）last saturday.The photo（复数 photos）,fiilled with horror and anger what（that） T（是I吧） was so astonished and sad（这句话中没有谓语,将",filled with" 改为“are filled with”）.There were many ihuman crimes in the photos.Many houses were burn(用分词形式burnt,) down,sime（smiling微笑着的） girls were weeping,Japanese planes were bombing Chinese cities...Over 300000 chinses（正确写法Chinese）people were killed!Even when（删去when,even足够表达“即使”的意思） the days are gone fover（forever）.(应该用逗号,前面为从句,加上后面的主句才是一个完整的句子)W(We) mustn't be(删除be, 我们不可以忘记,而不是“我们不可以被忘记”) forgotten（forget them）.