请帮忙修改一篇英文信.写给朋友的英文信,有部分中文参考.可追加分数,

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  • Finally I find the time to write you longer today.

    I watched an MTV few days ago. The leading actress is Lee Chien-na(李千娜), a Taiwanese singer born in 1984. She won the Best New Performer category prize in the 47th Golden Horse Awards. When I saw her hairstyle in the MTV, your look in 2009 came into my mind.

    What I really want to say is that that hairstyle is really quite good. You know, black, mid-long hair seems young, healthy, and vigorous. Do you think so? I believe that all of your students think so.

    This is the photo of you, my most treasured, to prove that. And I wondered where you hair dresser is. Is he still alive? Or what happened to you and him that makes you don’t go to him any more? Just joking~~

    As I mentioned, many guys changed a lot, I think, when I went back to HK, e.g. Tom, Mike.And you,too,to be honest. Have you found that you look thinner and thinner? I don't know what happened to you. Anyway, please, please take good care of yourself and keep a good mood. As I said, there's always a better way to figure out the problem and I always have a plan B~

    It is more than one month that I was back to Beijing. I count the seconds to kill the time.I don’t know how to express all about what I want to say in the depths of my mind. And I don’t know whether you could understand me either. I stil remembered the words you said that don't be a bird without feet. In fact, I definitely know what I want and I do insist on it. I don't like to lead a wandering life without a stable home which in deed is a waste of tim, I think. Just because of having clear target, there is really small space for me to make a choice .And accordingly it is more difficult. I guess, my insistence could not be forgiven by most people. So I don't even think of explaining myself. I have got too many awful results already, and I think it could not be much worse than that even it goes worse.

    By the way,you told me that the employees in Tencent got 90 monthly salary last year. A hunter contacted me for Tencent few days ago, so I confirmed it with him. Normally, the middle-level employee could get 15.5 monthly salary yearly. Even the one who made special contritution to the company would be given large reward can't get that much. It is exaggerated.

    Kinda miss you these days.

    累死我了,一定要给高分啊,真的是很用心的帮你改的,不是光修改病句,很多地方都是根据你的意思重新表达的.