En...u know,I'm not good at writing in English cause I'm Chinese and am only 14 years old.But I just wanna u to know,I love ur music so much,ur music and ur voice are very pure and beautiful.Even though I could not find ur record in our city,I still listen to ur songs on the Internet everyday.Your music makes me comfortable.
写的很好,修改了几处,没有大问题