尾巴加了一点,其他的偶现在也想不出来咯～
I'm so glad to hear that you will be promoted as Credit manager.I think you are quite suitable for this position for your qualifications and experience.
Besides showing my congratulations to you,I should also congraluate to your president airman,who has the good sense to recognize a good man.As far as I know you are the best candidate for this position.
The future is full of opportunities and challenges.I sincerely hope you will adapt to this new position quickly and develop better and better.