请帮我修改一下雅思作文The issue is talking about which cases play an im

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  • is genetic factors or environment influence?

    改为,Are they genetic factors,or environmental influence?

    therefore,leading to people in growing number are apt to recognize the reliability of genetic science

    我觉得这句话有问题,分不清主语了.

    this baby was born by human,but not contain the basic character of human-beings,instead of wild animals fiercely behavior and living habit.

    I think this sentence is totally wrong.

    the human baby takes on the characters of animals,acting fiercely and behaving like a animal,instead of human.

    其实楼主还有很多问题,语法上的,词汇上的.要是我是评卷老师,我觉得我不会给6分