There is a hard work (hard work---hard-working)peasant who is called Uncle Susan of China.Just like Aunt Susan ,his voick was so attractive that (加上it) shocked the world.
Because of born to (of born poor---he was born)poor,he almost never recieved the education in ferular(ferular---regular) school.But he is so crazy in(in---about) music.No matter (加上what)windy,rainy or cold days.He always sings in local wood.
He always help (help---helps)the poor man with a kind heart(with a kind heart---heartedly).he has eyes only for the animals.(整个句子改为There are only animals in his eyes)The chicken and goose in the yard that to be the(that to be ---have become) loyal audience of him.
.In return to(to ---for) his determination and perseverance,he is more and more popular now.