请懂英语的哥哥姐姐帮我看看我的演讲稿!

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  • This me

    this is me

    Hello,every one!

    My name is Li Hao Wei.My English name is Mike Miller.I am a 13 years old boy.I live in the (用a更好)beautiful city of Nanchang.I am in Nanchang Railway No.1 Middle School.And I am in Class15,Grade 7.

    In school,my favorite subject is English.Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well.But I like it.Because I think it's very interesting.I belive that if you try your best,everything can be done well.

    I also like sports very much.Such as(改为for example因为such as不能单独成句),running,badminton and so on.

    There are three people in my family.They're my father,my mother and I(改为me,宾格更谦虚合适).And I like(可以用love.them very much!

    OK.This is me .If you like me.Please remember me——a sunny boy!

    总的来说还是很不错的,加油