跪求查我写的奥巴马演讲读后感语法错误

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  • I like to watch people giving speeches which are interesting.They lead me to think about many things.And I have watched a lot,but I love Obama’s speech best.The title of his speech was Dream and Responsibility which he gave at the school opening.As usual,the speech gave me a lot of ideas.He not only gave his understanding of dreamand responsibility but also life.As the first African-American present in American history,he spoke about his experiences.It isn’t easy to make any achievements,but he still achieved.So we should hold on our dreams if we have any.Unlike other speakers,he usually draws people’s attention to the bigger picture in life.

    Even though,we don’t know what future means for us,but we should still try our best to pursue the life we want.Everyonehas his responsibility and dream,so we should do ourduty and chase our dreams

    你这好多都中文思维啊,小童鞋!