I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I would like to be a spokesman for animals to try my best to protect them.
I like animals very much and I have a loving heart for animals, especially polar bears. So I want to speak for polar bears. Nowadays, the balance of nature is being destroyed and the weather is getting warmer and warmer. What’s worse, some people kill polar bears for their own sake. As a consequence, the number of polar bear is becoming smaller and smaller. So, in order to increase people’s awareness of protecting polar bears, I apply for the spokesman for polar bears sincerely.
I do hope I can be chosen as a spokesman for polar bears.
Yours,
Lihua
考查提纲类作文的写作。提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。话题是动物代言人，要点是以提纲的形式表示的，要适当增加细节，不能只是把要点翻译成英语、，注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的in order to increase people’s awareness of protecting polar bears, I apply for the spokesman for polar bears sincerely.这句话用了目的状语，还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。如：What’s worse, As a consequence, especially文章读起来很连贯。