Dear Jack
Hey Jack,it's been a long time since I last say you!Listen,I've got a problem that really frustrates me and you're the only person that can help me out.You see,my worst subject is English so who better to ask than my best friend from the US?The problem is I've got a PowerPoint Presentation that I need to present in English in two days and there's no way I can accurately translate the entire script by myself.I actually have about two thirds of it translated already,but I'm not sure about the accuracy and there's still one third left to go.So can you please help me out?I've attached the script as a PDF file with this email so all you have to do is download the small file to see.I'll treat you to anything you want the next time you come visit on the holidays so please just help me!Thanks so much BF,TTFN!
Sincerely,Tony (放到右边去)
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