修改后：
When one mentions China,people naturally think of the Great Wall,the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace,etc.No doubt that all of these have been viewed as the symbols of China,and will be remembered forever.All of these are tangible cultural heritages inherited from our ancestors,and of which we are always proud of.But,what can we leave for the world today to remember us by?
I believe it is passion.I want people to see China as a nation full of passion,because spirit wealth is more valuable than material legacy.
Action leads to fulfilled dreams,and the key to action lies in passion.So the key to make dream come true is whether or not you have passion.Take Minhong Yu,the CEO of New Oriental for instance,he was a man of passion who was as a student from an impoverished mountain area got accepted into Pecking University and later established New Oriental and made it a success after numerous hardships.Until now he has given speeches in different universities to encourage the young people to fulfill their dreams with passion.During the 4 years in college,we should live everyday with passion,and march forward to our dreams.This also reflects responsibility for work,study and life.
I hope one day I will hear the praise that “China is a country full of passion”.
天上~