上个星期,我和我父母去北京旅游了.那几天天气很好,我们也游玩了很多美丽有趣的地方.当然,美味的食物是绝不能错过的.整个旅程我们都玩得很高兴.但是还有一个让我更高兴的事情.有一位游客掉了钱包,没钱回旅馆了.
应该还没有完吧?你是不是帮他了?
还有,文中有几处不合适的地方：with the fine days we visited many places where was beautiful and interesting中,把where was改成that were,或者更简洁地说：...we visited many beautiful and interesting places.
enjoy的过去式写成enjoyed.