请英文高手帮忙看下面的英文察看下有没有语法错误,几句,

2个回答

  • 语法错误并不多,但是恕我直言,作为学校申请信来说,写得很不符合英语习惯

    Could you please advise when the final decision would be made and when I would be able to get the result?

    I wish that I could have my graduate study (或postgraduate stydy) in your university as I am a person who has great ambition and likes to take any challenge.I am confident that I would achieve a higher level in academic field if I would have the oppotunity to get the degree from your university.