我写的作文有没有什么语法错误?

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  • think 的过去式是thought,还是这句can要改成could ,

    the children who live in poor area.

    紧张nervous 是形容词,不需要didn't ,直接用not 就可以了

    A lot of 用了两次,最好换一个,可以换成much / large sum of .

    donated to the chaity,

    Thanks for our friends' supports.不是thank for,不能缺少主语,支持是可数名词.

    its改成it's,它的改成它是

    take part in 后一般是接活动,而不是人,可改成take part in the activity

    this 改成these,你前面用的是events ,

    for the charity