第一个：active 和confident 位置最好对调,因为如果active发音是元音开头（具体忘了）,就要改a为an
第二个：Hope后面跟从句that ,句子缺少主语,还一点就是Hope从句是难以实现的 愿望,一般用wish,否则就用hope to do.
第三个：abilities,talents,一般是要加个s,表多种,
希望不会出错.
Hi,everyone.I am aactive and confident girl.It is my honor t
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