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  • Nowadays, more and more college students want to do a part-time job. But different people have different ideas.

    Some person think the part-time job occupies students a lot of time learning and many person put emphasis on it. Because of poverty ,some people should take some part-time jobs. Above all study must come first.

    Others think there are many benefits to take a part-time job. For instance, the ability to train people, making it possible for people to adapt to the society .

    In my opinion, a part-time job may be good or bad. People should grasp the metric. Don't forget to learn,.Student's main task is to learn. Now begin to adjust immediately! !

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