请帮我检查和修改下英语作文吧Why would you prefer to take a bus?Firstly,Com

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  • 第一问 我自己帮你润色的地方

    ①the bus stop is near my house.Walk to the bus stop only takes 5 minutes.

    →the distance to the bus stop is shorter.Walking to the bus stop only takes 5 minutes.

    ②I think that the bus can go to any place where I want to go.

    →From my point fo view,the bus can take me anywhere I'd like to go.

    ③so take the bus,i can enjoying the scenery.

    →So I can enjoy the scenery outside the window when I’m on a bus.

    第二问

    ①take the subway,I can save much time.

    →I can save much time by taking the subway.

    ②the city I am living is always in traffic jam

    → the city I am living in has serious problem of traffic jam

    ③I also prefer the subway because of that is no traffic jams.

    →There is another advantage of the subway--no traffic jams.

    ④the subway is runs on schedule语法错误

    →the subway always runs on schedule