这是我的英文简历,谁能帮帮找找语法错误~

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  • 1.就直接用Resume,这一点上用常用的就好

    2."INDIVIDUALINFO" --- Personal Info.

    3.电话写一个就好

    4.出生日期或者年龄至少要有一项

    5.Job responsibility的第一条 --- Take charge of 改成 Responsible for,receipting 改为receiving或answering; process their treatment?最后应该是to them.

    6.Analysis the data of sales.--- Sales analysis

    7.draw some rules and regulations

    .自己还是再好好改一下,有些用词似乎不是很妥当,再注意下单复数,你们的客人或者同事都不止一个吧