Question

感谢别人指出我的工作上的失误,我以后会更加注意的 英文怎么表达

Answer 1

I'm very appreciate you for being pointed out my mistakes on work , and i'll pay more attention to it in the future.

也许你可以参考下我的翻译，我最近学过这句话，希望能够帮助到您!