Dear Miss Yan,
I am glad to have a chance to write a letter to you. I like you very much because your classes are so interesting. But I want to give you some advice. First, you speak too quickly in class. Would you mind speaking more slowly? Then we can understand you better. Second, would you mind not giving us too much homework every day? If we spend too much time on homework, we won’t have time to relax ourselves. Last, I feel you are a little strict. I am a little afraid of you. Of course, you can still be strict with us in class, but after class we sould be friends, don’t you think so?
本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为给新老师提出建议。具体内容包括建议信的格式，建议的内容包括老师说话语速太快，作业有点儿多，有点儿严肃，在写作时应注意使用委婉的语句，同时应注意语言的准确性和连贯性。