第二个稍微好一些,语法错误少点
如果两个完整的独立的句子之间没有任何连词连接那就是错句
我给你一个没语法错误的
There are five people in my family,and they are my grandpa,grandma,my parents and me.My fahther is a doctor,and my mother is a teacher.They are bustling and hustlling everyday.Usually I stay at home with grandpa and grandma and they love me very much.I'm very fond of my family.