帮修改一下英语作文The world needs love

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  • You know,love is beautiful.Without it,the moon can not goes round; without it,the river will dry.love is indespensble in this world.

    When i saw the olders live alone,I will give them more help.On sunday,I will company them,joking with them,telling the story with them and I feel happy when they smile loudly.We love,so we are here and the world became more beautiful because of love.

    If we share love with people around us,the world will be more bettering everyday.My friends,come on!The world need love,so do we.

    感觉我写的好哈哈.

    对了你的英语作文写的太口语化了,写成书面语.

    It is said that the world without love like the river without water.I think it is right.In our world,we need help each other.such as.

    像这样写,分会高.

    GOOD LUCK