1.I love my last job,but family is also important to me.So I chose to have a one and a half years' vacation since pregnancy.Now I have a very adorable daughter,I would like to start working again to promise her better education and living.
2.I admit that hotel and business are two different industries.However,when it comes to managing,I think they have a lot in common.(“但是我认为管理上有很多共同点”,原文是不是太绝对了）Hotel industry needs marketing,and business also needs to provide customers with good services.In fact,hotel and business industry are always combined together,especially in the luxury sector.(“事实上,酒店和商业常常是结合在一起的,尤其是在奢侈品领域”,按自己的想法改了……）
3.I have 8 years' experience in hotel managing,and have been proved to be with impressive abilities of managing and emergency dealing,as well as outstanding marketing ideas ans skills.In addition,choosing to work at home assures me stability.At the same time,I already have a lovely daughter and I don't need to have long vacations to rest.
4.Since I've been on vacation for a year and a half,I may lost a little of my marketing sensitivity and analysing ability.I also haven't paid enough atention to my English enhancing.These are the aspects need to be improved.Moreover,I sometimes get a little bit anxious when working since I don't like to dillydally.