帮忙修改下演讲稿(英语的)谢谢!

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  • There is a strong earthquake happended in wenchuang of sichuang province.Since then,.anyone there’s life has changed改成 An awful earthquake in Sichuan province changed all the people's life there会比较简洁.

    The earthquake take away their houses,their families,even,their lives应该用过去式took away 同时,我觉得their houses were destroyed and many lifes were killde because of the earthquake 会更好的.