帮忙修改我今天的写的初二英语作文

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  • 我来答,你等着.需要点时间.

    so,you see,i'm unhealthy.i don't like vegetables at all.i never take (exercise是名次,前面要加个动词)exercise.but i want to get good P.E.grades.who can helps me with my health.

    my P.E.teacher says,we need to drink some water or milk every day,and to eat vegetables at least 4 times a week .it is good for our health.as for sleeping.we must sleep 8 hours every night.exercise is interesting.if we want to be strong,we need to take exercise every morning.by the way.you can be clever and strong.

    好写字母该用大写哦.我给你改好了,有些细节的东西改了你自己注意咯.