短文改错 When I was a child,my mom was pushed me to study hard,h

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  • When I was a child,my mom was (此处was去掉)pushed me to study hard,hoping I could get a chance to go to college.I experience(此处应用过去式+d) pressure for the first time.I did that (what)my mom expected because I didn’t want to let her off(down;let sb.down让某人失落).I was born to(in) a poor peasant family,but (改为so,此处的逻辑关系应该为顺承而非转折)I really knew life was not easy.All the things my mother did was(were此处应该为复数) the result of her hope that I could lead (加a)better life in the future.As the saying go(goes),“No pains,no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother(mother's) expectations and have a chance to go to college.Thanks to my mother’s push and the pressure,I made it.Now,I no longer think pressure is a good(此处是bad) thing.