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I am eighteen (year改成years) old and I live in (加入a) small village in the Peak District, not far from Nottingham. I (grow改成grew) up in this village, so I know everyone here. That (is后加入not 或 把is改成isn't) the problem---the problem is that there is nothing to do and nobody of my age to do it with!
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