Dear Wang Lan,
I’m writing to tell you one of my unforgettable experiences in my senior school. Last Monday afternoon we had a P. E. lesson. Our teacher taught us to practice the long jump. When the bell rang, we gathered on the playground. After warming-up exercises, the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it. Then we followed the teacher and practiced one after another. Soon came my turn, but I felt a bit nervous. Though I failed the first time, my teacher encouraged me not to lose my heart. I kept on practicing. At last I was able to jump over 3 meters.
From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
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