My birthday party
My birthday is 14th May.At that day,my mother bought me a big birthday cake and cooked many delicious foods.I invent my friends to my party.After had a meal ,we sang songs and played games.In the afternoon,we went to the park in my dad's car.In the evening,my grandfather and grandmother came to my house for dinner,my uncle,aunt and sister came too.My sister gave me a present and then,I went to bed.I had a very happy birthday party.这个有点难吧?换个.
happy birthday
Today is mybirthday.I am really happy.I had dinner with my dear friends,did shopping and recieved some gifts.A friend asked me what else entertainment I did.I said it was enough,friends,beautiful shose and gifts.I think I am really lucky to have so much things.
In the morning,I recieved a short massage from mum,saying wish you have a good health,good luck ,I am very happy.
你可以适当删改一下,我实在不能准确摸准你的实际水平.这牵扯到“一般过去式”.