electronic 是形容词 这里应该改为 electronics 名词 电子学
a outgoing ----an outgoing
play game--playing games
work--working
waiter--waitress
second 拼写有误
a office--an office
最后一句话完全不对可改为 because it makes my life fruitful and happy
请改改语法 这篇文章是我的英语作文,求大侠帮我改改.
electronic 是形容词 这里应该改为 electronics 名词 电子学
a outgoing ----an outgoing
play game--playing games
work--working
waiter--waitress
second 拼写有误
a office--an office
最后一句话完全不对可改为 because it makes my life fruitful and happy