I am a big fan of yours.And I am so happy to tell you how much I admire you.I appreciate all the character you have ever played.The moment I saw your beautiful eyes,I was fully attracted by that.In my eyes,you are the perfect one I've ever know .I loved you since the very beginning and I will always stand by you.
前面这样比较好,西方人比较注重逻辑,你是从中文直译过来他们可能理解不了.建议第二段不要提到他变老这种事,很没有意义并且他们不这样认为并且不喜欢别人这样说.