A part of the scene was showing the removal of a victim （women’s -- 单数应该是woman's） face
in horrible detail that ( cause -- 过去时caused) some audience members ( had fainted - 应改为 to fain 因为句型是 cause sb.to so sth) during the film
screenings at the Edinburgh Film Festival（,改句号.) Franju’s apparent response （hearing that -- 改为to the news ） was "Now I know why Scotsmen wear skirts."