不是吧?你这说的……错误太多了吧?
就5分?算了,就当是帮同学了……
第一个你可以写
i think the rules of our school is perfect
firstly,the rules are not very strict but easygoing ,we can limit ourselves in the decipline and at the same time we can learn knowledge then we can have a good behiver in the society while we get into job,and the third the rules also lead us to be a good man …………………………in a word ,the rules in our school are good for us .i like them and i obey them too
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第二.三个你自己写写吧 你可以写写自己如何在学习上在生活上发生改变的……都可以 ,不必太真实了,但也别太虚夸了!最后一个你只要围绕刻苦努力就行用上一句你们刚学的好像是（改编）nothing is impossible if you set your mind to do it
剩下的你自己搞定吧!好好学习啊!