有几处错误和不妥当的地方,我给你做了修改.如下： Shopping Online I thinkshopping online is a new way to shop. However,there are some things bad with it. For example, the goods are not real.And the price is too high. Sometimes if you buy a shirt, you have to wait for a long time to receive it.
So I think though shopping online is great, it also has some weaknesses.希望对你有所帮助.如果满意,请采纳哟……学习进步、快乐!