拜托帮我看一下有没有语法错误It's the third day that I haven't seen you.Do

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  • It's the third day that I can't see you.Do you know that I miss you so much.I wonder why I can't see you?Only for your hair?I know it's important for you .But in your heart,is it really more important than me I feel really sad.

    I don't want to lost you,and you are the most important person in my life .Although I have someone else-my best friends ,I still need you.I really want to see you .I don't know how to survive the days without you .

    And I even feel the whole world is changing.

    Because of you,I lost myself .From now on,you will be the only reason for all happiness.

    你的有点中国式英语,大概改了一下.