some people killed oneself.数不对,用法也不好
His arms and legs is cripple,数不对
His arms and legs is cripple,he just can use his nose to draw pictures,although it’s very difficult,but Joe is happy,even happier than the other healthy people!断句有问题
Why can he strongly to exist?语法不对
总的来说这篇文章很chinglish.作者的思维是中文式的.改了就不是作者自己的了.