1."graducated"是啥?是"graduate"吧.
2.然后"my oral english was poor"应该是"is".
3."so i want to search a foreigner who can communicate with me to use english"这个应该是“i want to look for someone who can communicate with me in English".
4."i can teach he/she chinese mutually."这边用"in return"更好吧.
5."i am staying in pudong shanghai china"这里用"I live in Pudong New Area,Shanghai,China now".
6."you can relate me to use MSN :liangxian@live.cn"换成"you can connect with me by sending mails to you can relate me to use MSN :liangxian@live.cn".
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