1,前面resolution为复数,则后面something about 应接them.
2,singer前没加冠词,应改成my dream job is to be a singer.
3,going to重复过多
4,倒二段最后句的用法很奇怪,不如说he wants to ask teacher for help,
是ask sb for help,
5,最后句that指代不明确,应改为to do to make it come true?
加油吧.望采纳.
这是我期末考英语时写的作文.帮我看一下有没有语法错误.我要估分.