好像有不少,文章也不大通顺.
I was so happy,是过去式,所以前面也应该过去式,when i remembered that story;
I went to visit the .,后面总共跟了三个地方,是复数,所以应该是用which were;
"what is my bowl?",应该为“where is my bowl”,意思是我的碗哪里去了;
I looked he,he 应该用him,前面应该再加个 at;
另外 fell down 这个词应该不大对,改成removed 更贴切一些,
did't,我认为应该用hadn't.
个人见解,