fight against不是with,fight with后面要接人,和...一起并肩
for miles around before a few days
for several square miles within just a few days
the smoke不用the
Now smoke can still be seen from...
winter前面不加the
heavy rain也不要加the
tons 后面加 of
had been put out改成was put out..., 一般过去就足够了
大致改了以上这些,写的还不错