基本没有大问题.
有两个地方建议您修改一下：
1.I'm from Class1,Grade6,Maiding Primary School(英语从小到大来的)
2.I like electronic organ and violin very much.
3.I live in ****街
4.My father is an engineer.
5.I am working very hard and my study is very good.
看看我的英文自我介召,内容如下:My name is XXX(保密).I'm twelve.I'm from Madii
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