短文改错My mother has always adviced me to keep a diary ,so i've

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  • My mother has always adviced me to keep a diary ,so i've followed his(改her) advice .I have been keeping a diary from (加a)young age and has many advantage(改advantages) .The few minutes spent write(改writing) the diary has helped me to(去掉to) see thew events of the day from in(去掉in) a different point of view .I felt that writing a diary is a good way to express anger .Also .i can dream of my future free(改freely).The diary will not judge me as(改like) other people ,Being able to read through how(改what) i have written help(改helps) remind me of events in the past.